What worked well:
*Good logo at the start - Wolfpack
* Variety of camera angles
*Nice font for the titles
Even Better If:
* It needs sound - non diegetic to start and then maybe a voiceover of Nathan saying "ahh yes hello...when he puts his hand out."
*The narrative needs to be clearer
*You need a bigger defintion between Nathan's scene and Owen's scene - we need to see they are two different people
*Some of your shots are held for too long - please cut them down a smidge
*Who is Owen? Make this clearer
*Remember the correct film title order! Check your timelines!
Sam du Berry
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